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12 Outstanding Airman of the Year

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: Yes, Group

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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Motivated and dedicated; Supervised 30 personnel; selected as AFSouth Services/MWA SNCO of the Year
- Managed 5 facilities; Gym, Pool, Library, Community and Bowling Center supporting more than 7500 people 
- Prepared and justified MWA's annual income, expense, and capital expenditure budgets over $1.2 million
- Managed 3 renovation projects that improved recreational and leisure desires for the AFSouth community 
  -- Ballroom renovation adding air condition, new stage, ceiling, and a new PA system -- over $129K project 
  -- Sports field renovation included new irrigation system and professional soccer field -- over $96K project 
  -- Bowling Center renovation; installed ceiling, flooring, wiring and 2 service counters -- over $22K project
- Developed a comprehensive 2003 sports and fitness program calendar -- created camaraderie with all nations
- Coordinated 15 individual service contracts for 5 facilities; maintenance, services and instructional classes
- Managed the planning and execution of MWA support of more than 15 Command level and Support Group
  taskings; including five Changes of Command ceremonies, and Strike Force South 50th Anniversary  celebration 
- Visionary! Prepared a detailed $126K budget for equipment -- all requirements identified and approved
- Coordinated and approved over 120 purchase orders, lateral transfers, and post engineer work order requests 
- Deployed to Allied Action 03 Istanbul, Turkey; managed food and lodging operation -- supported 2000 people
- Conducted 24 physical fitness assessments, designed exercise programs, and provided nutritional consultations
- Hosted Dynamic Mix and IPC-03 with their annual conferences that involved more than 400 attendees
- Introduced cardio theater to AFSouth gym; 100% improvement in daily workouts -- customer are thrilled! 
- Conducted a site survey for Allied Action 2004 Persano, Italy; created lodging, fitness and resale programs
- Approved requisitions for deployment equipment; totaling over $30K in support of Allied Action 04 exercise
- Planned and supervised May Fitness Month programs; supported 12 events with more than 500 participants

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT: 
- Vice president for Naples Top 3 Association; mentoring enlisted and setting example for his peers to follow
- Innovator! Assisted the Executive Committee in rewriting the Naples Top 3 Association Bylaws and Charter 
- Completed 7 semester hours toward Bachelor Degree in Exercise Physiology; maintained remarkable 3.2 GPA
- Fundraiser chairperson; sponsored talent show, barbecue and golf tournament -- raised more than $1500.00 
- Led by example! Participated in the nomination of NCO's and Airman's for the quarterly Sharp Award 
- Supported Enlisted Professional Enhancement Program; taught 3 Health and Fitness classes -- over 30 students
- Certified Fitness Trainer! Completed 3 Continuing Educational Units for Master Physical Fitness Certification
- Completed 2 Italian language courses; effectively improved communication with international co-workers 
- Created 3 fitness programs to improved annual PT scores; supports Air Force Motto "fit to fight, fit for life" 
- Attended NATO SNCO orientation course at Oberramagau, Germany; improved multi-national communication
- Assisted chairperson with Enlisted Appreciation Day; sponsored bowling and pool entertainment programs

BASE/COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Selected as SNCO in charge of the 9/11 ceremony; gave all commands, presided over the raising and lowering of
  19 NATO flags to half staff; saluted and received special thanks from Admiral {LNAME} for a job well done
- Big Heart! Donated numerous appliances, clothes, and toiletry items to the Caserta Battered Wives Home
- Hosted 2003 AFSouth Holiday Concert featuring CINCSOUTH Band -- show enjoyed by over 300 people 
- Key player in the Army Air Corps versus Navy softball tournament; awarded the trophy for winning 1st place 
- Chairperson for 2003 Allied Officers Wives Club International Charity Bazaars -- raised more than $108K 
- Organized the International Children festival with variety of culture activities, show included 600 participants 
- Enhanced the quality of life for local youth; assisted the International School and the Anglo-Italian Montessori
  School with their annual Christmas Concert, over 1200 entertained -- efforts applauded by faculty and family
- Directed MWA's support in assisting German NCO Association during Octoberfest; more than 1500 attendees
- Volunteered with the youth basketball training camp; developed fundamental and good sportsmanship programs

NOTE:

  Man problem is attention to detail.  Numbers under 10 must be spelled out; unless it is a time or in a series of numbers that are greater then 10.  I also like the $$$ bullets.  Lots of impact with little room for error.


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