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 Communications and Information Quarter Program 

Award Cat: NCO 3C0 C&I
Winner: Functional

AFI 36-2845









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The following Example has been taken out of IMT viewer so the formatting might be off.  I did not changed mission information, only names to protect myself and the people I have received the information from.  If you have anything you would like to submit, please do so.  If you have found this information useful, please let me know. Everyone of these letters has taken considerable amount of time to put together.  Please treat yourself to something special from one of the ads on the page.  We will both get something out of it.  (All money gathered pays for hosting fees and domain fees.  HONESTLY, when I see money come in it also prompts me to work harder on the site.)

I will attempt to give a little insight to the entire process if I know it.

DUTY PERFORMANCE:
DUTY PERFORMANCE:
- Deployed to Gulfport, MS for Hurricane Katrina relief ops--11K tons supplies delivered/5.8K people rescued
  -- Restored link to Gulfport ANG Training Center...extended network to over 5,000 users--provided critical C2
- Setup 12 laptops in tent city Internet Cafe...provided network svcs to 14 units--boosted morale for 500+ troops
- Palletized four UTC increments for Pakistan earthquake relief ops...100% air mobile--forces rapidly deployed
- Lead NCC planner for 3-level comm field exercise--drafted training objectives/designed network architecture
  -- Excelled as site NCOIC...led team from multiple work centers/AFSCs--facilitated training for 22 personnel
- Developed and taught Red Data Module/TACLANE class for 12 NCC personnel--eliminated training shortfall
- Fined-tuned unit COMSEC program...inspected all accts--revised 4 shop OIs/corrected 13 form discrepancies

DUTY RELATED SELF-IMPROVEMENT EFFORTS:
- Completed six hours of prerequisites for grad school--first step towards Masters degree in Mgmt Info Systems
- Accomplished 12 hours of SkillPort Enduring Leadership CBTs--enhanced professional leadership/mgmt skills
- Flew 15 hours/mo for <BASE> Aero Club Commercial Pilot Program--prepped for AF commissioning program
- Read book from CSAF Professional Reading Program--increased his knowledge of the history of AF air power

NOTE:

  Very Good package.  There were no spelling mistakes, one minor numbering issue, (Numbers under 10 spelled out unless they deal with time or follow numbers larger than 10 in the same bullet), and one abbreviation not spelled out   The two errors are very minor for a quarterly package since space is at a premium. I personally like the last bullet.  the individual read a CSAF recommended book.  This says a lot about him.  If you wonder why I say this, have you read any of the CSAF books?  why not?  Hence, it does make a good bullet.

 


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