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Enlisted Recognition Program (Airman of the Quarter, 3rd)

Award Cat: AMN
Winner: Flt









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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY
- #1 of 12 airmen in element; always looking for challenges; consistently displayed initiative and
  commitment; possesses NCO-level tenacity and leadership skills--epitome of excellence
- Attended specialized Asynchronous Trunking Module Switch training in Hurlburt Field Air Base Florida.
  --Utilized training to build a data connection between <BASE A> and <BASE B> in support of BF 05-02 .
-Troubleshot Cisco processing unit and a Cisco 6500 chassis which were malfunctioning; Quickly isolated
  problem to faulty chassis and initiated immediate repair actions to bring critical TAOC network back on-line

- Configured multi-layer switching network equipment to support over 500 clients during exercise Blue Flag 05
  -- Greatly contributed to exercise success by providing a modern, high-speed coalition network to participants
- Deployed 45 days to Combined Air Operations Center <BASE> (CAOC-?), <BASE>Air Force Base (NAF?), as
  network technician in direct support of Blue Flag 05-02-- Key player in exercise setup and execution
  -- Meticulously administered four networks to support 517 US operators and 88 coalition partners to
     accomplish 1,620 combat air strike sorties; enabled US and coalition target integration of air tasking orders
-Troubleshot and repaired Video Teleconferencing System; isolated problem to improper connections leading to
  signal loss; system enabled Blue Flag 05-02 players to conference with six sites and Secretary of the Air Force.
- Repaired data link between <BASE>ANG base and <BASE>AFB; enabled data feed between both bases

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Dedicated to physical fitness--achieved an amazing 100 composite score on new Air Force fitness program,
  placed in the upper two percent of the squadron; formally recognized by the squadron commander in June 2005
- Completed 2 hours of computer-based training towards his Cisco Network Associate Certification; Used 
  knowledge gained to serve as a technical consultant in the set up and implementation of a local area training
  network providing training to 25 military and 1 civilian personnel.

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
-Donated notebooks and paper to local <NAME> County school district's "Back on the Bus" program.
  -- materials collected provide much needed school supplies to underprivileged children in 31 local schools.
- Strong supporter of unit activities; played in the ###th Computer Operations Squadrons booster club's golf  
  tournament; Raised $1000 in funds to offset the cost of the annual holiday party.


Note:

This is a good entry level award package.  There is a lot of good information but the bullet structure needs work.  Bullets are not complete sentences.  If the bullet reads like a complete sentence, edit.  Use Bullet Writing (PPT developed at Brooks) as an education tool.  Other than that there was only a minor numbering error and a information error. ATM = Asynchronous Transfer Mode not Asynchronous Trunking Module. When you write, make sure you know what you are talking about otherwise the board may discredit the package.


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