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Enlisted Recognition Program (Airman of the Quarter, 4th)

Award Cat: AMN
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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY: Characterizes "excellence in all we do!"
- Provided FEMA prime power--18M lbs ice/35M gal water distributed-- <BASE> recognized as #1 relief hub
- RWP crew manager--maintained critical real property assets valued at $590K--provided 98% reliability rating
- Spearheaded installation of generator at base golf course--nonstop power provided during transformer repair
- Provided generator support for WSA power outage--transformer replaced/level one security uncompromised
- Shop Hazmat program manager--ensured shop program passed ESHOCAMP inspection with minor infraction
- Team member in $12K BAK-12 tape change--ensured system integrity and guaranteed equipment reliability

SIGNIFICANT SELF IMPROVEMENT: Highly motivated airman focused on personal and professional growth
- Accumulated 3.5 hours Ethics training through AF IT E-Learning system--mindful of ethical diversity in section
- Completed Air Force Training course--knowledge was paramount in establishing continuity for shop training
- Dedicated--accomplished six credit hours in pursuit of Associates degree in Mechanical/Electrical Technology
- Diligently finished 3hr Dynamics of Leadership independent study class--broadened leadership fundamentals

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT: Instinctively embodies a positive image with selfless dedication
- Assisted in mounting art in nursery/pediatric floors in local Hospitals--improved quality of life for the patients
- Volunteered with Goodwill to move/organize donation storage area--made area 75% more effective for sales
- Supported the local college effort to feed needy families during the holidays--stocked over 15K pounds of food
- Participated in ##AF adopt-a-plane program for Team-56--volunteered 9 hrs--washed/cleaned B-58 rocket sled




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Very good award.  The only problem was the use of none spelled out Acronyms.


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