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Enlisted Recognition Program (NCO of the Quarter, 3rd)

Award Cat: NCO
Winner: HQ









Key Points to Writing
  • If you haven't already, take a writing class
  • WRITE!!! The more you do it, the better you get.
  • Don't be afraid to ask for HELP.
  • The only person looking out for either you or your subordinate is YOU!
  • Use a spell checker (F7 in Office) 
  • Remember, writing doesn't have to win to REWARD!
  • Use various writing resources like Merriam-Webster Online.

The following example has been taken out of a IMT document.  I have changed mission information to protect myself and the people I have received the information from.  I will attempt to give a little insight to the entire process if I know it.

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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY
- Skilfully maintained and operated Allied Information Flow System (AIFS) operation; flawlessly transmitted
  480 messages; fixed 54 messages, ensuring time critical live-fire plans distributed to 5 NATO forces
- Systems Guru! Implemented database to track 474 security badges; decreased processing time by 23 minutes
- Expertly located/fixed faulty settings crippling base unclassified mail server; restored 195 users' e-mail access
- Innovator! Authored AIFS daily system verification program; reduced tedious 33 min process to only 15 secs
SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT
- Leadership understudy; read two books from CCAF suggested reading list; improved leadership insight
- Education minded! Completed two college credit hours toward Bachelors; enhanced professional development
BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
- Vice President elect for the JCSC Junior NCO association; organized two fund-raisers earning 315 EURO
- Air Force Birthday's entertainment committee officer; produced inspiring airpower video lauded by attendees

Note:

  Good package.  Two misspelling, totaling and integrating.  GOC and EAC looked to be understood, so...  finally, CND stands for the Unified Command


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