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AFRC SNCO of the Year - 2005 Example

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: ???

AFI 36-2845









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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- World class leader!  Expertly managed 36 people & $1M of assets; dedicated & committed to improving unit
  -- Promoted/monitored/enforced training; unit successfully completed 9 CDC's & 6 PME; 30% improvement
  -- Measuring success; key person in unit's advancement; identified & benchmarked 20 key operations metrics
- Sets goals/achieves results!  Immediately took action when vital training was not occurring; man on a mission!
  -- Instrumental in procuring 2E2 classroom assets (10 used PCs/keyboards); saved unit $10K; must for training
  -- Delegated, instructed & advised 3 sections to research/develop realistic, within budget, fiscal training plan
- Active team building!  Devoted to advancing working relationships with active duty, reserve, and guard units
  -- Negotiated with active duty # CS, obtained 14 days of mobile comm training; all on UTA drill weekends
  -- Partnered with Air National Guard's ### CBCS; received 14 days of outstanding combat comm training
- Promoted unit morale/self-esteem!  Spearheaded recognition program; devoted hrs to developing leaders/mgrs
  -- Skillfully mentored airman; taught project mgt/org skills; emphasized writing; dividend was 9 mbrs promoted
  -- Coached/educated mbrs on awards & decorations; submitted 12 qtrly award pkgs, won 5; earned 11 medals
- Best public relations!  Never misses an opportunity to promote unit's services & goals; informing & educating!
  -- Led publishing 3 <BASE> articles; educated mbrs on ### Job Control; reduced helpdesk calls by 10%
  -- Devised/planned two cmdr's calls; composed/presented annual review, goals, & projects; recognized mbrs
- Honors AF customs & courtesies!  Orchestrated two retirement ceremonies; unprecedented attention to detail!
  -- Directed/obtained: medals, certificates, letters, customized shadow boxes, personalized gifts, & US flags
  -- Developed scripts; organized audio & visual systems; procured money, food & drinks; invited VIP & family
- Leads by example!  Innovative & creative; always finds ways to improve/enhance unit; thinks outside the box!
  -- Engineered two 4'x3' oak display cases; publicizing mgt/award winners; unselfishly donated $250.00/120hrs
  -- Ingeniously procured & refurbished two electric Dremel boot polishers & shoe shine boxes; no cost to unit!

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Devoted to learning!  Takes advantage of all training opportunities; excels in career & professional knowledge
  -- Attended/completed five day Leadership Symposium; learning state of the art performance/management tools
  -- Accomplished demanding five day Information Technology Infrastructure Library (ITIL) certification course
- Educating others!  Devotes time & energy to sharing information; developing our future AF managers & leaders
  -- Highly skilled instructor; designed, developed, & presented five day technical software programming class
  -- Developed "NCO's Toolkit" CD; contains sample awards, EPRs, letters & guides; saving mbrs countless hrs

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Man of action!  Proactively helps improve the quality of life for others; true example of "service before self"
  -- Volunteered time & donated money for "Relay for Life" in support of American Cancer Society; raised $220
  -- Taking care of our own! Donated/transported $200.00 worth of clothing & kitchen utensils to Airman's Attic
  -- Contributed time, talent, & money to Charlotte Rescue Mission; cleaned warehouse; bought $100 of supplies
- Improving AF life! Active member in wing's "Top Three" team; honorary speaker at NCO Induction Ceremony
  -- Handpicked for 2nd straight year to honor/remember POWs/MIAs comrades; excellent communication skills

NOTE:

   Pretty good package...  Just a couple of numbering issues.

 


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