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Award Examples

Military Volunteer (Volunteer of the Quarter, 1st)

Award Cat: NCO
Winner: SQU









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The following Military Volunteer (Special Awards/Recognition Program) example has been taken out of an IMT document.   I did not change mission information, only names to protect myself and the people I have received the information from.  If you have anything you would like to submit, please do so.  If you have found this information useful, please let me know. Everyone of these letters has taken considerable amount of time to put together.  Please treat yourself to something special from one of the ads on the page.  We will both get something out of it.  (All money gathered pays for hosting fees and domain fees.  HONESTLY, when I see money come in it also prompts me to work harder on the site.)  As for this particular award , it appears to be a USAFE award.  I am still looking for a reference concerning it.

- Sacrificed 18 hrs of valuable/limited personal time coaching London Central High School weight training class
  -- Individually tailored programs for 10 weightlifters--provided valuable weightlifting tips/breathing technique
  -- Supplied personal experience to six on coaching staff--developed student athletes personal training programs
- Donated 3 hours off-duty time to mentor and instruct two high school students during study halls; superb mentor
-- Filled the educational gap for students traveling/missing school--motivated apprentices to learn new material
- RAF Croughton base soccer team leader--fostered host nation relations by playing three United Kingdom teams
- Volunteered 10 hours supervising and cleaning for the RAF Croughton Youth Group keeping teens off the street
  -- Developed and sustained activities for teens--efforts provided a safe alternative place for base teens to meet
- Moved over 200 cases of Girl Scout Cookies to/from storage area--key to scouts raising $8K+ in cookie sales
- Humanitarian! Sacrificed 2 hours to cook/clean/serve at Croughton's free Valentines Couples Spaghetti Dinner
- First to take charge! Assumed responsibility of Det's AF Assistance Fund Campaign--100% contact in 12 hrs
- United RAF Croughton Chapel community--cooked and cleaned at four free soup dinners--fed more than 100!

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Great package! Quick, Simple and to the Point.   Only a minor Numbering problem, numbers under 10 are spelled out unless they deal with time or follow numbers larger than 10 in the same bullet.


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