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Military Volunteer (Volunteer of the Quarter, 2nd)

Award Cat: NCO
Winner: Group

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The following Military Volunteer (Special Awards/Recognition Program) example has been taken out of an IMT document.   I did not change mission information, only names to protect myself and the people I have received the information from.  If you have anything you would like to submit, please do so.  If you have found this information useful, please let me know. Everyone of these letters has taken considerable amount of time to put together.  Please treat yourself to something special from one of the ads on the page.  We will both get something out of it.  (All money gathered pays for hosting fees and domain fees.  HONESTLY, when I see money come in it also prompts me to work harder on the site.)  As for this particular award , it appears to be a USAFE award.  I am still looking for a reference concerning it.

- Dynamic skills! Gave 18 hrs of personal time coaching the London Central High School weight training class
  -- Individually tailored programs for 10 weightlifters--provided valuable weightlifting tips/breathing technique
- Superior Leader! Gave 15 hours towards coaching at the LCHS football camp--coached football skills to 22
  -- Innovative! Developed and initiated a combine skills competition for LCHS football camp--gauged talent
  -- Six different skills were timed and tested--team members now understand college-level athletic requirements
- Heartfelt Leadership! Set up/cooked/cleaned for LCHS football camp BBQ dinner for 30 students and parents
- RAF Croughton base soccer team leader--fostered host nation relations by playing two United Kingdom teams
- Volunteered 12 hours supervising and cleaning for the RAF Croughton Youth Group keeping teens off the street
  -- Developed and sustained activities for teens--efforts provided a safe alternative place for base teens to meet
  -- Organized and led Youth Group paintball game--day out taught leadership and teamwork skills to 12 children
- Researched and acquired five subscriptions to Airman Magazine for unit--AF benefit previously not utilized
- Gold hearted! United RAF Croughton chapel community--cooked/cleaned up during free soup dinner--fed 30!


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